Penname: LaRosadeLibertad [Contact][Report This]
Real name: Rah
Member Since: 26 Oct 2006
Sophomore history major who loves fanfic. I write primarily Charmed and Harry Potter but I've also written L&O: SVU, Criminal Minds, The 4400 and Numb3rs.
Reviews by LaRosadeLibertad
Summary: When an unsub kidnaps one the BAU's own, the FBI must take on one of the most bizzarre cases of their careers. Following a trail of evidence that leads them to Sin City. What happens when the world's best profliers meet the world's top forensic crime scene investigators?
Categories: Criminal Minds Characters: All Characters
Chapters: 1 Completed: No Word count: 384
[Report This] Published: 28 May 2006 Updated: 28 May 2006
Reviewer: LaRosadeLibertad Signed
Date: 27 Oct 2006 Title: Chapter 1: On This Day
You need to watch your tenses. You started in the present/future and ended up in the past. Spell check is your friend. I suggest you use it.
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