Reviews For Secret Properties of Light
Reviewer: Shadowwolf (Anonymous) · Date: 14 Nov 2004 2:20:55 PM · On: chapter 8
I liked the idea of your story and it was very well put together. However, this is just my personal opinion, but I really doubt Jesse would keep saying 'baby', He's more of a shy, understanding person than someone like, well, Brennan. That's the only thing that really bothered me about the story, otherwise, it was great. Keep it up.
Reviewer: Annie Stuart (Anonymous) · Date: 20 May 2004 2:01:35 AM · On: The Final ShowdownSubmit a Review
The story was really good, but Jesse's last name is Kilmartin, not Kilpartick.
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