...Mightier Than the Sword
A Fan Fiction Archive
Reviews For Daniel
Reviewer: Marie (Anonymous) · Date: 11 Jul 2004 1:48:52 AM · On: Part Eight

Great tension buildup. Iliked the way you portrayed the characters of Rollie, Angie, and Leo though i don't know why Angie kept refusing Rollie's help when she was so clearly in danger. I liked the way the tension built up at the end. Good story.

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