...Mightier Than the Sword
A Fan Fiction Archive
Reviewer: Hi (Anonymous) · Date: 08 Dec 2006 5:35:20 AM · On: Chapter 3

are you like 10..?

Reviewer: Chris (Anonymous) · Date: 22 Nov 2006 5:58:55 PM · On: Chapter 3

This is all a bit rushed, and rather poorly written - you need help with grammar and punctuation. The number of mistakes in the summary, the first thing potential readers see, doesn't encourage people to go further.

Author's Response: i agree, idea move faster then my fingers

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