...Mightier Than the Sword
A Fan Fiction Archive
Reviewer: Beth (Anonymous) · Date: 11 Nov 2010 10:07:09 PM · On: It was just a drink between friends

The sex was extremely awkward, you switched tenses, making it more awkward. It was over wayyy too fast, heck it started too fast, and are watching the same svu as I am? Cuz Chris Meloni does NOT have an "angular" face. And he's barely taller than Mariska. He should have said that his marriage suffered because he had feelings for Liv, even though he never acted on them. And please fix the ending, its kinda ridiculous and cliche. If u work on that stuff though, it'll be amazing

Reviewer: ted (Anonymous) · Date: 07 Apr 2010 8:26:22 PM · On: It was just a drink between friends

Good as far as it went. As a Mariska nut, I want descriptions of her breasts and her erect nipples. I want a verbal picture of her pussy and her clitoris.

Reviewer: EO-Shipper (Anonymous) · Date: 15 Jun 2009 6:36:06 AM · On: It was just a drink between friends

interesting but It would have been better if Elliot were to say something about having feelings for her as well. I mean, you don't want to let Olivia think she's a rebound do you?

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