...Mightier Than the Sword
A Fan Fiction Archive
Reviews For The Secret Within
Reviewer: kali (Anonymous) · Date: 20 Nov 2010 2:29:26 PM · On: On This Day

good

Reviewer: Rain (Anonymous) · Date: 30 Oct 2006 4:34:51 PM · On: On This Day

thats it.....WHAT THE HELL!!! UPDATE WOMAN!! OR MAN! OR WHATEVER U ARE UPDATE!!!...sheesh

Reviewer: LaRosadeLibertad (Signed) · Date: 27 Oct 2006 8:24:22 PM · On: On This Day

You need to watch your tenses. You started in the present/future and ended up in the past. Spell check is your friend. I suggest you use it.

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