...Mightier Than the Sword
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Reviewer: Shimmie (Anonymous) · Date: 28 Feb 2009 10:46:17 AM · On: 5. In the woods

heyy it's me agen...anyhu i like this chapter it had a lot of detail and J/E

Reviewer: shimmie (Anonymous) · Date: 28 Feb 2009 10:35:17 AM · On: 4. leaving for paradise

WoW..I love the atmosphere...x

Reviewer: shimmie (Anonymous) · Date: 28 Feb 2009 10:21:01 AM · On: 3. Convincing Shal

cheeky little thing Jesse..im still liking it so far..a87;

Reviewer: shimmie (Anonymous) · Date: 28 Feb 2009 10:08:18 AM · On: 1. struggle

Gr8...i'll keep reading 2 c how it ends..xb29;

Reviewer: emma (Anonymous) · Date: 23 Apr 2006 2:50:30 AM · On: 24. Some things wrong....

this is aa great story is there any more still to come?

Reviewer: laura (Anonymous) · Date: 05 Nov 2005 7:26:59 PM · On: 18.Escort to mansion

hey this is really good stuff. keep goin cos i have a really bad imagination and have absolutely no idea what's going on.

Reviewer: laura (Anonymous) · Date: 05 Nov 2005 6:12:36 PM · On: 6. not my room

hey i'd just like to compliment you on yr story u'v gt a gr8 imagination

Reviewer: tania (Anonymous) · Date: 14 Sep 2005 11:58:51 PM · On: 13. Christopher Harwood

hey... the story is very good but it ends here? and wht happend to shal??? there is gonna be a nother story???? please respond! kissixxxxx

Author's Response: check up on my story again. you'll find i've only just begun. tunder28 (thx 4 the reviews)

Reviewer: ... (Anonymous) · Date: 27 Aug 2005 12:31:21 AM · On: 12. Questions

It was good! It was short, though, as you previously mentioned! I'd like to read more!!!

Reviewer: Lisa (Anonymous) · Date: 04 Aug 2005 3:15:30 AM · On: 4. leaving for paradise

I am greatly enjoying your story. I especially like the interplay between Brennan and Shalimar. I think it's great the way she makes him nervous. I really wish the chapters were longer.

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