Reviews For Control within
Reviewer: Shimmie (Anonymous) · Date: 28 Feb 2009 10:46:17 AM · On: 5. In the woods
heyy it's me agen...anyhu i like this chapter it had a lot of detail and J/E
Reviewer: shimmie (Anonymous) · Date: 28 Feb 2009 10:35:17 AM · On: 4. leaving for paradise
WoW..I love the atmosphere...x
Reviewer: shimmie (Anonymous) · Date: 28 Feb 2009 10:21:01 AM · On: 3. Convincing Shal
cheeky little thing Jesse..im still liking it so far..a87;
Reviewer: shimmie (Anonymous) · Date: 28 Feb 2009 10:08:18 AM · On: 1. struggle
Gr8...i'll keep reading 2 c how it ends..xb29;
Reviewer: emma (Anonymous) · Date: 23 Apr 2006 2:50:30 AM · On: 24. Some things wrong....
this is aa great story is there any more still to come?
Reviewer: laura (Anonymous) · Date: 05 Nov 2005 7:26:59 PM · On: 18.Escort to mansion
hey this is really good stuff. keep goin cos i have a really bad imagination and have absolutely no idea what's going on.
Reviewer: laura (Anonymous) · Date: 05 Nov 2005 6:12:36 PM · On: 6. not my room
hey i'd just like to compliment you on yr story u'v gt a gr8 imagination
Reviewer: tania (Anonymous) · Date: 14 Sep 2005 11:58:51 PM · On: 13. Christopher Harwood
hey... the story is very good but it ends here? and wht happend to shal??? there is gonna be a nother story???? please respond! kissixxxxx
Reviewer: ... (Anonymous) · Date: 27 Aug 2005 12:31:21 AM · On: 12. Questions
It was good! It was short, though, as you previously mentioned! I'd like to read more!!!
Reviewer: Lisa (Anonymous) · Date: 04 Aug 2005 3:15:30 AM · On: 4. leaving for paradiseSubmit a Review
I am greatly enjoying your story. I especially like the interplay between Brennan and Shalimar. I think it's great the way she makes him nervous. I really wish the chapters were longer.
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