Reviews For Death
Reviewer: earth_fairy2006 (Anonymous) · Date: 20 Jun 2006 9:13:12 AM · On: Chapter Three Please...
that was a sad chapter and a bit longer,
Reviewer: earh_fairy2006 (Anonymous) · Date: 20 Jun 2006 9:11:23 AM · On: Chapter Two Big Battle
another short chapter, but it was good, loved the ending of the chapter
Reviewer: earth_fairy2006 (Anonymous) · Date: 20 Jun 2006 9:09:56 AM · On: Knockout
that was a good chapter but it was really short
Reviewer: Skateboard Freak (Anonymous) · Date: 29 Nov 2004 10:42:48 AM · On: Knockout
This was a cool story, but put more description.
Reviewer: Shadowwolf (Anonymous) · Date: 22 Nov 2004 4:56:51 PM · On: Chapter Two Big BattleSubmit a Review
Well, it had a good storyline and there's loads of ideas in there, but it was way too short. It could have been made much longer and way more description put in there. Keep trying though, it'll get there, but please coninue with the story.
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