...Mightier Than the Sword
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Reviewer: earth_fairy2006 (Anonymous) · Date: 20 Jun 2006 9:13:12 AM · On: Chapter Three Please...

that was a sad chapter and a bit longer,

Reviewer: earh_fairy2006 (Anonymous) · Date: 20 Jun 2006 9:11:23 AM · On: Chapter Two Big Battle

another short chapter, but it was good, loved the ending of the chapter

Reviewer: earth_fairy2006 (Anonymous) · Date: 20 Jun 2006 9:09:56 AM · On: Knockout

that was a good chapter but it was really short

Reviewer: Skateboard Freak (Anonymous) · Date: 29 Nov 2004 10:42:48 AM · On: Knockout

This was a cool story, but put more description.

Reviewer: Shadowwolf (Anonymous) · Date: 22 Nov 2004 4:56:51 PM · On: Chapter Two Big Battle

Well, it had a good storyline and there's loads of ideas in there, but it was way too short. It could have been made much longer and way more description put in there. Keep trying though, it'll get there, but please coninue with the story.

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